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Children Under age 12 should not have homework!
No parents want their children to be unhealthy! What does that related to the homework? Think of it. Almost everyday, children sit in their house doing homework for at least 20 minutes! What do you think? Boring!
These are some reasons to show that children should not have homework!
Firstly, children should spend their time to stay outside, have some fresh air and maybe play with some friends to create more friendship.
They should relax! Not sitting at their house doing boring and difficult homework.
Secondly, homework is very unhealthy thing to do. Children get serious with their homework. Some people eat to get a bit relaxer, as well as children. That makes children fat and the fat in their body can actually harm children, even kill them!
Thirdly, its not fair to me to write this so, I think I should stop.
But then, I wont be allowed to play the computer so, I continue.
Some school gives too much homework and some children take over 4 hours to do it. Although, most of the schools in England are not like that but, think of the other country! I am sure that some do give that amount of homework.
Finally, children do enough work from school! They have to stay in school for seven hours and they still have to carry back more work to do at home? Dont you think they have done enough work? Thats too much for young children!
In conclusion, I think children under the age 12 should not have homework! Children should spend their time as kid doing fun things.
Because when their grown up their have their own business, they get very serious about work in the future, let them relax now. Homework which is more like school work is very unhealthy for them! Children have done work for at least seven hours at school, and they still have to do more work at home. No parent wants their child to be weak. I think the homework should be canceled!!